Monday, 25 March 2013

Corrections to my Contents Page



After creating my magazine I printed it out and had a focus group with 6 members of my target audience. I received really useful feedback with positive and negative thoughts about my product and suggested improvements that I could make.

I made corrections to my contents page so that it looked consistent. I used the bright orange for the title of this page and I increased the amount of wording on the page. I tried to add more interest to the page by adding more detail to the articles. I wrote a small description of each article to encourage the reader to look at the certain articles. My focus group gave me feedback to reduce the amount of images in the grid. I reduced it from 9 to 6.

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