After receiving really useful information from m assessor I
decided to only make small changes to my third article. I was told by my assessor
that the images would stand out and look more affective wit borders. I took
this advice into account and put tin 3pt borders around each image. The borders
I chose were the same sea green colour as the mast head and the break out box
on this page. I chose this colour as it conotates the great outdoors and is a
gender neutral colour. I have tried to keep the structured grid effect consistent
throughout my entire magazine and I think that the borders on this article make
this article more structural and grid like.
I didn’t really make any other changes n this article
although I did look at the spacing on some of my text and play around with the
size of some quotes. I feel overall that I created this article up to a high
standard as it was one of the only articles I took inspiration from a professional
magazine. I feel that this made this specific article look more authentic than
the rest.
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