After getting audience feedback from a focus
group of my target audience and talking to my assessor I received helpful advice
on how I can improve each one of my products. My first article didn’t need that
much improving. The things that I were told to improve were.
- Introduce more of the colour green (this connotates the great outdoors and would make the article more interesting to read)
- Take the drop caps off the beginning of each paragraph
- Make the images larger (my focus group said there was too much white space)
I feel that my new and improved article is
better than my first one. I feel that it looks more professional and authentic.
I only made slight changes to this article because I received mainly positive
feedback for this one. It has taken me a while to sort the layout of this
article out. I kept changing it, but I think I am finally happy with the
layout. If I had more time I would have improved the imagery on this article by
taking some more photos in the college’s studio. This might have made my
magazine look more professional.
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